Story!

i have been working on a story. It is a normal love story... just in a teenage girls point of view... This is Autumn Love. I hope you all enjoy it. Tell me what you thing PLEASE!! The story is not done yet so keep that in mind also!




Autumn Love
By: Jenna Marie

I was the new girl at school. No friends all-alone I knew no one and I didn’t care to make new friends for now. Al I wanted was my old friends, house, and life back but most of all I wanted Cory back.
Who is Cory? You are wondering that aren’t you?
Well Cory was my boyfriend… Ex-boyfriend now. I miss him allot his hair, eyes, smile, the way he knew when something was wrong. * sighs * Cory was my 1st love, boyfriend, kiss. I miss him more than anything.
“Sorry miss!” a boy said
Clumsy me! I had bumped into someone…
“Oh! No...It was my fault!” I said
“Here you go miss.” He said
“Oh T-Thanks…” I said picking up the rest of my books and taking the ones he handed to me. Then I left…
I bet he thinks I am weird now. First guy I meet… and I rind everything. Just like me to do so!
You may wonder who “Me” is… am I right? I knew I was!
I am Ella I am 16 and am very clumsy. Not to mention shy, random, funny, annoying, hyper, crazy, well… That is all once you get to know me. I am tall I guess… 5ft! I am a blue eyed girl with Blonde hair… I have to wear reading glasses. I am nice, sensitive, an easy crier, kind of tough if needed… That is me! Ella… or new girl.
“Hey! Wait up new girl!!!” the boy said
He was cute black hair… just above his shoulder, blue eyes… Guessing a skater… punk? His voice was so sweet. He had mussels… and his nose and bottom lip was priced.
“You forgot this!” He said looking me in the eyes and smiling.
I bet I was as red as a cherry! I could feel myself blushing.
His smile was to die for! Pulse them blue eyes had a sparkle when he smiled…
“Hello!” He said waving his hand in front of my eyes.
“Oh! Sorry what did you say?” I asked
“You forgot this.” He said giving me my Diary.
“OH!! MY DIARY!! Thank you so much! If I lost this w would have died.” I said smiling at him
“Hey Hunny!” a girl said coming toward us.
“Hey!” He said as she came over and held her hand
My Heart sank into my Stomach… He had a Girlfriend… I should have known!
“Well! I umm… I better get going… I have to find the AP math classroom… before I miss the bell… Bye!” I said and took off.
I could feel tears coming… But I dared not cry… Someone my see… and then what?
Well I finally found my math class! Just in time to!
I opened the door… Then closed it…
“Ah! Miss. Pamir…” said the Teacher
I blushed… “I’m Mr. White!” he said
“Take a seat next to Mr. Brooks!” He said
“Psst over here!” He Said… The brooks kid…
Oh My Lord!! It was skater boy!!! I walked over and sat beside him.
“Hey new girl!” He said with that Drop-Dead-Gorgeous Smile.
“Oh… Umm H…Hi!!” I said
“Don’t call me Mr. Brooks I am Drake!” He said looking for something…
“Hey Uh… Do you have an extra pencil?” He asked
“Yes I do.” I said getting him one the giving it to him.
“Thanks… Purple with hearts ha-Ha! Awesome… Ella!” He said smiling
Oh no…! MY Pencil has my name on it… He thinks I am weir for sure now!
“You are welcome! Glad toy like it!!” I said
“Turn to page 112! Miss. Pamir you can share with Mr. Brooks… Till I get you a new one!” said Mr. White
I looked at the book from my desk.
I Don’t Bite…” Drake said
“Oh!” I blushed and leaned in closer.
“You have a very pretty name” He said looking me in the eyes.
“Oh… Why… Thank you!” I said looking him in the eyes
“Um... if you don’t mind me saying… you smell nice also.” He said
“Well I think your girlfriend would be mad if she heard you say them things” I told him
“She would but there is something… Different about you…” He said putting his hand on mine
“Oh!” I blushed and pushed his hand away.
“You are sweeter and smarter then any girl in this big old town.” He said
“Thank you Verry much!” I said
“Do you gotta Cell?” He asked
“I do!” I said
“May I see it?” He asked
“Yes you may?” I said taking it from my back pocket.
“Thanks here is mine.” He said giving me his cell phone.
And we entered our numbers into each other’s phones…
“Here you go!” I said giving him his cell phone back and taking mine.
The hours flew by and soon it was lunch time.
“Ella girl!” said Drake waving at me to sit at their table.
“Ella girl?” His girlfriend said
“She is new so be nice…” I heard him say.
“Hello Ella I am Casey!” His girl friend said
“Nice to meet you” I said smiling
“Ell! This is Pete, Christy, John, Mia, Jazz, Chris, and Cory.
“Oh…” I said and frowned
“Something wrong Hun?” Jazz asked
N… Y… Mmhmm.” I said
“Boy?” asked Mia
“Yes… How did you know?” I asked
They all laughed
“She has a knack for it!” Said Casey
“Tell… said Mia
“Well… Before I moved here… Cory…” I said
“Cory was my boyfriend…” I started to tear a little
“Aw!” Said the girls
“I’ll change my name!” Said Cory
I laughed “No… it is ok I will be fine.” I said
My Phone Buzzed just then
“Oh!” I yelled
“What!?” Everyone said
“Sorry my Phone… Where is the nearest rest room?” I asked
“I’ll show her!” Drake said
So he showed me to the girl’s rest room…
One new text? From... Drake?? I read
It said: You have a Cute Laugh!
So I wrote: Thanks! You have a nice Smile…
He text: Thank you Sweetie! Love your pants ;)
I text: Oh... Thanks… Now stop there before something bas is said…
He text: Ok Love!
So we walked back to the table
“Took you forever!” Said Mia
“Oh… Well it was Cory” I said
2hrs Passed and It was time to go home…
“How was school Hun?” Asked my mom
“It was ok… I met this nice boy… But he is just a friend.” I said
“Boy? What about Cory??” Mom asked
“I said he was just a friend!” I told her
“So Cory is just a friend?” mom asked
“No Drake is just a friend!!” I said
“Who is Drake? “ Mom asked
“The Boy I met!”I said she was really testing my nerves
“So do you like him?” I asked
“No!” I lied
“Mom! I love… loved Cory. But we are so far apart!” I said
“Speaking of Cory… He called today!” Mom said
“Oh! Mom did he really?” I asked
He called and I missed it! I fell bad… Not only about that but. I was falling in Love with Drake!!!
“Yes! Why don’t you call him back” She said
“Ok!!” I said and ran up the stairs to call him
“Ello?” Said Mrs. Smith
She was originally From London… So she still had an accent. That was the first reason I fell for Cory!
“Hi Mrs. Smith!” I said
“Ella Dear is that you? How have you been darling? “She asked
“Yes it is and I am doing Great! Mom said that Cory called! Is he home?” I said
“Why yes he is. “ She said
“Ello Love!” It was Cory oh to hear his voice again… Made me get Butterflies
“Hey! I said
“Ella I miss you so much!” He said
“Cory I miss you to!!” I said starting to tear up.
“Ell nothing seems right without you. School is boring without seeing you. I can’t pass the Swings at the playground, Mr. Ice’s ice cream store, or the street you use to live on. All of that reminds me of you and of us!” He said
That was all I needed to hear and I started crying.
“I...M...M...Miss you to! Seeing your Face! I miss your Hugs… I just want to come home!!” I said sobbing
“Oh Ells! I didn’t mean to make you cry…” He said
“And I would Kill to give you a Hug right now!” He said again
“It’s ok… I would do anything to see you again!” I said
“Ella dinner is ready!” Mom said
“Well I have to go and eat dinner… “ I said still sobbing a little
“Yea I have to study… Mr. Gold butt is giving a test tomorrow” He said and we started laughing Mr. Gold butt was Mr. Goldman The history teacher everyone hated.
“Call you tomorrow?” I asked
“I’ll be waiting for it!” He said
“I love you!!” I said starting to cry again
“I love you to… and don’t cry I am always with you… In your heart and dreams!” He said
That was another reason why I fell for him… He made me feel special and was so sweet!
“Bye!” We said then hung up
So I went down stairs and ate my dinner… did my home work took a shower then went to bed
And I Slept awhile till my phone started to ring
“H... Hello?” I said
“Hey sweetie!” said someone over the phone
“Cory?” I asked
“No! It is Drake!” he said
“Drake? It is one in the morning what do you want??” I asked
“I just wanted to tell you I got you something... and wanted to know if I could come over and give it to you tomorrow!” He said

“Oh… Well ok but don’t call past Ten anymore!!!” I said
“HA-HA… Ok! See you tomorrow night” He said
“Night!” I said and hung up
What did he want to give me?? Why did it have to be me? Shouldn’t he buy gifts for his girlfriend and not me? Oh well I guess I’ll find out tomorrow…
The next day!
“Ella wake up!! It is 12:00PM!” Mom said
“Mom it is Saturday!!” I said in a grumpy voice
“Well did you forget that I have work? Pulse you need to clean the house. I am having friends come over for work tonight! “She said
Why did it have to be tonight! It is w weekend and it was Saturday… and... Oh no!! Drake was coming over also! I have to clean and look nice!! Ugh… what is going to happen next!
“Oh! Also Sally called last week and said she was going to spend the week with us. I said it was ok… she should be here around 2:00Am or so.” Mom said
Sally I have not seen her in forever… I can’t wait for that. She was my best friend before I moved. Maybe she can help me with my boy problems. She was the best when it came to that stuff.
“Oh!! Mom god… First the party then… Now Sally!! I said
“I thought you liked Sally and it is a party. Some of the people are bringing their families! What was the other thing you said?” she asked
“Nothing never mind…” I said
So I cleaned the house… Till the door bell rang
“Who is it?” I asked
“Yea sista from antha mista” I heard on the other side of the door...
I knew right then and there it was sally
So I opened the door and sure enough it was Sally!
“Sally!!” I said hugging her like we have not seen each other for Years.
“Ell!! I missed you so much girl!” she said
“I missed you to!!!” I said
“So what is going on?” she asked
“Mom is having a party… and.” I said
“And? You found a boy didn’t you?”
“No… Well kind of! I mean he has a girlfriend. But he likes me!! He is going to bring me a gift today.” I told her
“Well that ruins… My surprise for you!” she said
“What! What? I want my surprise!” she said
“Oh… well alright!”She said
“Mr. Surprise come on in...” She said to someone.
It… It was Cory! Right there in my house … Just like the old days.
“Ella!”He said giving me a hug and a kiss
“Knock Knock!”Said someone at the door
It was… Yup you guessed it drake. Why did stuff like this happen to me? I like really like Drake. But I still love Cory. What am I going to do?
“Hey Drake!” I said
“Who is he?” Cory asked
“Oh right sorry… Cory and Sally this is Drake Brooks. He was my first friend in school and Drake these are my friend Cory and Sally from when I lived in Texas.”I said
“Hey…” they all said at once
“Ella uh… Maybe I should uh… come back… mm… Later” Drake said sounding a little hurt
“Oh… That um… Yea Maybe…” I said
“See you later! At your moms party… Her and my mom work together.”He said walking to his car
“Oh! Ok see you then.” I said waving as he drove off
“Ell… Is that the guy?”Sally asked
“Yea Sally…It is” I said
“Will someone… Ells don’t tell me you like that guy!!” Said Cory

“Well… Kind of But I love you!” I told him
“You like him… how? Like like or just like?” He asked
“I like him as a friend… He has a girlfriend anyway. But I think he wants to be more then friends. “I told him
Everything is going to be really messed up to night. I have that feeling. I will not go downstairs all night… Maybe just to eat but that is it. I can’t afford for something to go wrong.
“Well… Let’s clean this house now and talk about all this later.” Said Sally trying to help.
“Ok!” Said me and Cory
So we cleaned the house it took us about 3 hours. Just in time to cause it was Three O clock and the party was at five.
So we had time to talk and get ready before mom came home and her friends started to come over.
“So about this Drake… Guy” Said Cory
“Cory leave her alone… Ok she doesn’t have to tell you everything!” Sally said